Blob Grip

I want to be a writer what do you think? PS: I'm 13?

Cold branch-like hands grabbed me with such force that it sent waves of fear down my spine. It's hand did not loosen up but it's grip became even tighter. The pain in my left arm had became unbearable I started to feel sweat run down my arm, or was it sweat I felt? The light post I stood next to hadn't given me enough light to see what was behind me, only enough to see what was in front of me. I was struck with horror when I saw my left arm. Not only was there blood dripping from my shoulder to the tip of my index finger, but there were also purple blobs and patches up and down that same arm. In the time that this was all happened in felt like hours maybe even days. But in reality it was only a matter of seconds. The hand released me I turned quickly to see who or what had grabbed me, but no one was there. it was only I who stood at the corner of Peach and Dry Creek Rd.

Yay! I found this question again (I answered it about 5 minutes ago only to have the screen come up saying you deleted it -_-)

Anyway --

Honestly, it sounds very eerie and I like the detail that you put.

HOWEVER...(and this is only my opinion) I think you should change just a few things...Such as:

"It's hand did not loosen up but it's grip became even tighter." This sentence is redundant and sounds awkward. If I were to change it, it would sound like this, "The more I tried to loosen the hand, the tighter the grip became." or "The hand tightened, crushing my ____" (whatever the hand was on -- chest, throat, arms, etc.)

"I started to feel sweat run down my arm, or was it sweat I felt?" Eh? This sentence leaves me with a look like O_o because it sounds awkward. Later the reader finds that it was blood, so you could say, "I felt something run down my arm. I told myself it was sweat, trying hard not to believe it could be anything else."

"but there were also purple blobs and patches" Personally, I think you could take out the word 'blobs.' To me, it sounds quite childish, and not a word I would describe spots on my arms to be. It would sound better if you simply said dark purple patches.

You're pretty good at writing, especially for someone who is only 13 years old. I congratulate you for posting this. I think you'll make a very good writer someday.

I hope I didn't sound to critical, but there's always improvement to be made ^_^